Not that much is really wrong, you just need to establish an account, to pay and receive money
use a spoiler like this
V$10,000-V$5,000
Current Balance
V$5,000
Also, try not to have it where a person "gives you a car"
I would let it slide for the first time, not sure about anyone else *ahem* axylth *ahem*
You get 20,000 or less, if you want to go with a budget build.
Just edit your posts a little bit, and you'll be fine
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However
I don't think you'll be able to get away with more than V$4,000 after buying three cars.